๐ต Writing Opinion Essays in Korean - Advanced Level (TOPIK 5–6)

Are you preparing for TOPIK II or aiming to write persuasive Korean essays? Opinion writing, especially in Korean, requires not only grammar mastery but also cultural understanding and vocabulary precision. Let’s learn how to write high-quality opinion essays with structure, advanced expressions, and cultural depth. ๐️
๐ง Understanding the Structure
Korean opinion essays usually follow this format:
- ์๋ก (Introduction): Present the topic and your stance.
- ๋ณธ๋ก (Body): Provide supporting reasons, examples, or counterarguments.
- ๊ฒฐ๋ก (Conclusion): Summarize your argument and give a final opinion or solution.
Use connectors such as:
์ฒซ์งธ๋ก, ๊ฒ๋ค๊ฐ, ๋ฐ๋ฉด์, ๋ฐ๋ผ์, ๊ฒฐ๊ตญ์๋
to enhance flow and cohesion.
๐ Sample Essay: Should Korea Ban Plastic Bags?
๐ ์๋ก (Introduction)
์ค๋๋ ํ๊ฒฝ ์ค์ผ ๋ฌธ์ ๋ ์ ์ธ๊ณ์ ์ผ๋ก ์ฌ๊ฐํด์ง๊ณ ์์ผ๋ฉฐ, ํนํ ์ผํ์ฉ ํ๋ผ์คํฑ ์ฌ์ฉ์ ์ฃผ์ ์์ธ ์ค ํ๋์ด๋ค. ๋ฐ๋ผ์ ํ๊ตญ์์๋ ํ๋ผ์คํฑ ๋ดํฌ๋ฅผ ์ ๋ฉด ๊ธ์งํด์ผ ํ๋ค๋ ์๊ฒฌ์ ๋์ํ๋ค.
Onelnal hwangyeong oyeom munjeneun jeon segyeteukjeok-eulo simgakhaejigo issgo, teughi ilhoeyong peullaseutik sayongeun ju-yo wonin jung hanaida. Ttara seo Hangug-eseodo peullaseutik bongtureul jeonmyeon geumjihaeya handaneun uigene dong-uihanda.
Environmental pollution has become a global crisis, and single-use plastics are a major cause. Therefore, I agree with the idea that Korea should completely ban plastic bags.
๐ ๋ณธ๋ก (Body)
์ฒซ์งธ, ํ๋ผ์คํฑ์ ๋ถํด๋๊ธฐ๊น์ง ์๋ฐฑ ๋ ์ด ๊ฑธ๋ฆฌ๋ฉฐ, ํด์ ์ํ๊ณ์ ์ฌ๊ฐํ ํผํด๋ฅผ ์ค๋ค. ์ค์ ๋ก ๋ง์ ํด์ ์๋ฌผ์ด ํ๋ผ์คํฑ์ ๋จน์ด๋ก ์ฐฉ๊ฐํ์ฌ ์๋ช ์ ์๋ ์ฌ๋ก๊ฐ ๋น๋ฒํ ๋ณด๊ณ ๋๊ณ ์๋ค.
Cheotjae, peullaseutigeun bunhaedoegi kkaji subaek nyeoni geollimyeo, haeyang saengtaege-e simgakhan pihaereul junda. Siljero manheun haeyang saengmuli peullaseutigeul meogi-ro chakgakhaeyeo saengmyeongeul ilhneun saryega binbeonhi bogodwego itda.
First, plastic takes hundreds of years to decompose and causes serious damage to marine ecosystems. In fact, many marine animals mistake plastics for food and die.
๋์งธ, ํ๋ผ์คํฑ ๋ดํฌ๋ฅผ ์์ฐํ๊ณ ์ฒ๋ฆฌํ๋ ๋ฐ ๋๋ ์๋์ง์ ์์์ ์๋นํ๋ค. ์ด๋ฅผ ์ค์ด๊ธฐ ์ํด ์ฌ์ฌ์ฉ ๊ฐ๋ฅํ ์ฒ๊ฐ๋ฐฉ ์ฌ์ฉ์ ์ฅ๋ คํ ํ์๊ฐ ์๋ค.
Duljae, peullaseutik bongtureul saengsanhago cheorihaneun de deuneun eneojiwa jawoneun sangdanghada. Ireul jurigi wihae jaesayong ganeunghan cheongabang sayongeul jangnyeohal piryoga itda.
Second, the energy and resources required to produce and dispose of plastic bags are significant. Promoting reusable cloth bags can reduce this burden.
๐ ๊ฒฐ๋ก (Conclusion)
๊ฒฐ๊ตญ์๋ ํ๊ฒฝ ๋ณดํธ์ ์ง์ ๊ฐ๋ฅํ ๋ฏธ๋๋ฅผ ์ํด ํ๋ผ์คํฑ ๋ดํฌ ๊ธ์ง๋ ํ์ํ๋ค. ์ ๋ถ๋ ๋ฒ์ ๊ท์ ๋ฅผ ๊ฐํํ๊ณ ์๋ฏผ๋ค๋ ์๋ฐ์ ์ผ๋ก ์ฐธ์ฌํด์ผ ํ๋ค.
Gyeolgugeneun hwangyeong boho-wa jisok ganeunghan miraereul wihae peullaseutik bongtu geumjineun piryohada. Jeongbuneun beobjeok gyuje-reul ganghwahago simindo-deuldo jabaljeogeuro chamyeohaeya handa.
Ultimately, banning plastic bags is necessary to protect the environment and ensure a sustainable future. The government should strengthen regulations, and citizens must participate voluntarily.
๐งพ Vocabulary and Advanced Expressions
Word/Expression | Meaning | Usage |
---|---|---|
์ ๋ฉด ๊ธ์ง | Total ban | ์ ๋ฉด ๊ธ์ง ์กฐ์น๋ฅผ ์ทจํ๋ค (take full ban action) |
์๋ฐ์ ์ผ๋ก | Voluntarily | ์๋ฐ์ ์ผ๋ก ์ฐธ์ฌํ๋ค (participate voluntarily) |
์ง์ ๊ฐ๋ฅํ๋ค | Be sustainable | ์ง์ ๊ฐ๋ฅํ ์ฌํ (sustainable society) |
๐ก Did You Know?
Korea has one of the most advanced recycling systems in the world! ♻️ In most neighborhoods, you must separate food waste, plastic, paper, and glass— and food waste is turned into fertilizer or biogas. Be sure to follow local rules when staying in Korea!
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