📝 Mastering the Korean Diary: Intermediate Writing Guide

Ready to go beyond "Today was fun"? Teacher Hoon explains how to use reasons, contrasts, and nuanced emotions to write a short, meaningful diary that sounds like a native speaker.

Bridge the Gap to Fluency (EEAT Tip)

At the Intermediate (TOPIK 3-4) stage, diary writing is your most powerful tool to turn "passive grammar" into "active skill." As a teacher, I recommend focusing on 5-7 well-structured sentences rather than a long essay. The goal is to connect your daily life with complex patterns like -지만 (contrast) or -아서/어서 (cause). Let's look at a model entry.

📝 Natural Intermediate Phrases

✨ 피곤하지만 뿌듯한 하루였다. (It was a tiring but satisfying day.)
✨ 생각보다 일이 잘 풀려서 다행이었다. (Fortunately, things went better than expected.)
✨ 조금 힘들었지만, 많이 배운 하루였다. (It was a bit hard, but I learned a lot today.)

📚 Essential Writing Grammar

✅ -았/었다 (Written Style): For a formal diary feel, use the plain style instead of ~요. (e.g., 운동했다).
✅ -아서/어서: To show clear cause and effect in one sentence.
✅ -았으면 좋겠다: The perfect closing for your daily wishes. (e.g., 내일은 더 행복했으면 좋겠다).

✍️ Model Diary Entry: A Productive Workday

오늘은 정말 바쁜 하루였다.
(Today was a really busy day.)

아침부터 회의가 있어서 일찍 일어났다.
(I woke up early because I had a meeting.)

프레젠테이션을 했는데 다행히 잘 끝났다.
(I gave a presentation, and fortunately, it went well.)

피곤하지만 성취감을 느꼈다.
(I'm tired, but I feel a sense of achievement.)

💡 Teacher Hoon's expert "Plain Style" Tip

In intermediate diaries, we often switch from 해요체 (~요) to 해라체 (~다). Using "했다" instead of "했어요" makes your writing sound like a real journal entry or a published essay. Try converting just one sentence a day into this written style to practice for the TOPIK writing section!

💡 Cultural Insight: "Emotion Diaries"

In Korea, many adults keep a 감정일기 (Emotion Diary). Stationery stores sell journals specifically designed with mood stickers and reflection prompts. This culture of self-reflection is deeply rooted, and sharing your "Today's TMI" (Too Much Information) on social media is a modern way to keep this diary tradition alive!

Want Feedback on Your Diary?

Don't just write for yourself! Book a 1:1 "Writing & Correction" session with Hoon on italki. We'll review your notebook or Google Doc together and upgrade your sentences with professional feedback.

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