πŸ”΅ Writing Opinion Essays in Korean - Advanced Level (TOPIK 5–6)

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Are you preparing for TOPIK II or aiming to write persuasive Korean essays? Opinion writing, especially in Korean, requires not only grammar mastery but also cultural understanding and vocabulary precision. Let’s learn how to write high-quality opinion essays with structure, advanced expressions, and cultural depth. πŸ–‹️


🧠 Understanding the Structure

Korean opinion essays usually follow this format:

  • μ„œλ‘  (Introduction): Present the topic and your stance.
  • λ³Έλ‘  (Body): Provide supporting reasons, examples, or counterarguments.
  • κ²°λ‘  (Conclusion): Summarize your argument and give a final opinion or solution.

Use connectors such as:
첫째둜, κ²Œλ‹€κ°€, λ°˜λ©΄μ—, λ”°λΌμ„œ, κ²°κ΅­μ—λŠ”
to enhance flow and cohesion.


πŸ“„ Sample Essay: Should Korea Ban Plastic Bags?

πŸ“ μ„œλ‘  (Introduction)

μ˜€λŠ˜λ‚  ν™˜κ²½ μ˜€μ—Ό λ¬Έμ œλŠ” μ „ μ„Έκ³„μ μœΌλ‘œ 심각해지고 있으며, 특히 일회용 ν”ŒλΌμŠ€ν‹± μ‚¬μš©μ€ μ£Όμš” 원인 쀑 ν•˜λ‚˜μ΄λ‹€. λ”°λΌμ„œ ν•œκ΅­μ—μ„œλ„ ν”ŒλΌμŠ€ν‹± λ΄‰νˆ¬λ₯Ό μ „λ©΄ κΈˆμ§€ν•΄μ•Ό ν•œλ‹€λŠ” μ˜κ²¬μ— λ™μ˜ν•œλ‹€.


 Onelnal hwangyeong oyeom munjeneun jeon segyeteukjeok-eulo simgakhaejigo issgo, teughi ilhoeyong peullaseutik sayongeun ju-yo wonin jung hanaida. Ttara seo Hangug-eseodo peullaseutik bongtureul jeonmyeon geumjihaeya handaneun uigene dong-uihanda.


 Environmental pollution has become a global crisis, and single-use plastics are a major cause. Therefore, I agree with the idea that Korea should completely ban plastic bags.


πŸ“„ λ³Έλ‘  (Body)

첫째, ν”ŒλΌμŠ€ν‹±μ€ λΆ„ν•΄λ˜κΈ°κΉŒμ§€ 수백 년이 걸리며, ν•΄μ–‘ μƒνƒœκ³„μ— μ‹¬κ°ν•œ ν”Όν•΄λ₯Ό μ€€λ‹€. μ‹€μ œλ‘œ λ§Žμ€ ν•΄μ–‘ 생물이 ν”ŒλΌμŠ€ν‹±μ„ 먹이둜 μ°©κ°ν•˜μ—¬ 생λͺ…을 μžƒλŠ” 사둀가 빈번히 보고되고 μžˆλ‹€.


 Cheotjae, peullaseutigeun bunhaedoegi kkaji subaek nyeoni geollimyeo, haeyang saengtaege-e simgakhan pihaereul junda. Siljero manheun haeyang saengmuli peullaseutigeul meogi-ro chakgakhaeyeo saengmyeongeul ilhneun saryega binbeonhi bogodwego itda.


 First, plastic takes hundreds of years to decompose and causes serious damage to marine ecosystems. In fact, many marine animals mistake plastics for food and die.


λ‘˜μ§Έ, ν”ŒλΌμŠ€ν‹± λ΄‰νˆ¬λ₯Ό μƒμ‚°ν•˜κ³  μ²˜λ¦¬ν•˜λŠ” 데 λ“œλŠ” μ—λ„ˆμ§€μ™€ μžμ›μ€ μƒλ‹Ήν•˜λ‹€. 이λ₯Ό 쀄이기 μœ„ν•΄ μž¬μ‚¬μš© κ°€λŠ₯ν•œ μ²œκ°€λ°© μ‚¬μš©μ„ μž₯λ €ν•  ν•„μš”κ°€ μžˆλ‹€.


 Duljae, peullaseutik bongtureul saengsanhago cheorihaneun de deuneun eneojiwa jawoneun sangdanghada. Ireul jurigi wihae jaesayong ganeunghan cheongabang sayongeul jangnyeohal piryoga itda.


 Second, the energy and resources required to produce and dispose of plastic bags are significant. Promoting reusable cloth bags can reduce this burden.


πŸ“„ κ²°λ‘  (Conclusion)

κ²°κ΅­μ—λŠ” ν™˜κ²½ λ³΄ν˜Έμ™€ 지속 κ°€λŠ₯ν•œ 미래λ₯Ό μœ„ν•΄ ν”ŒλΌμŠ€ν‹± λ΄‰νˆ¬ κΈˆμ§€λŠ” ν•„μš”ν•˜λ‹€. μ •λΆ€λŠ” 법적 규제λ₯Ό κ°•ν™”ν•˜κ³  μ‹œλ―Όλ“€λ„ 자발적으둜 μ°Έμ—¬ν•΄μ•Ό ν•œλ‹€.


 Gyeolgugeneun hwangyeong boho-wa jisok ganeunghan miraereul wihae peullaseutik bongtu geumjineun piryohada. Jeongbuneun beobjeok gyuje-reul ganghwahago simindo-deuldo jabaljeogeuro chamyeohaeya handa.

Ultimately, banning plastic bags is necessary to protect the environment and ensure a sustainable future. The government should strengthen regulations, and citizens must participate voluntarily.


🧾 Vocabulary and Advanced Expressions

Word/Expression Meaning Usage
μ „λ©΄ κΈˆμ§€ Total ban μ „λ©΄ κΈˆμ§€ 쑰치λ₯Ό μ·¨ν•˜λ‹€ (take full ban action)
자발적으둜 Voluntarily 자발적으둜 μ°Έμ—¬ν•˜λ‹€ (participate voluntarily)
지속 κ°€λŠ₯ν•˜λ‹€ Be sustainable 지속 κ°€λŠ₯ν•œ μ‚¬νšŒ (sustainable society)


πŸ’‘ Did You Know?

Korea has one of the most advanced recycling systems in the world! ♻️ In most neighborhoods, you must separate food waste, plastic, paper, and glass— and food waste is turned into fertilizer or biogas. Be sure to follow local rules when staying in Korea!


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πŸ’Œ Final Thoughts:
Opinion writing in Korean can feel challenging, but it's also rewarding. Use this essay structure, apply powerful expressions, and keep practicing. I believe you can express your ideas clearly and confidently. 😊


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